Short Excerpt from “The Slumber Party”

I figured it was time I started scheduling some posts with excerpts from some of the books I’ve got up on Amazon. I’m going to start with the short stories that are available on Kindle Unlimited, because there are already excerpts from my longer novels available on this website.

So first up is an excerpt from “The Slumber Party” – a story I’ve been sitting on for several years and that I finally decided to release under one of my new pseudonyms, Phil McAvity.

It’s available here to read as part of your Kindle Unlimited subscription or to purchase for 99c/99p

Here’s the excerpt, I hope you enjoy it enough to go and want to read the whole book.

I have no idea how long I sat in the lounge staring at the television but not actually watching it. My mind was reeling and thoughts of naked, nubile young women—women in the prime of their youthful womanhood—were irrepressible. It had to have been at least fifteen or twenty minutes, I suppose. The credits started rolling on the film I’d been watching and I didn’t even notice.

Then Chloe came walking in, fully clothed. “Mr. J, we’re getting ready to start another game.” She paused, then added, “And we want you to play too.”

I looked up, speechless. Then finally said, “I… I’m not sure that’s such a good idea, Chloe.”

“Oh, come on! Sara said she’ll play if you do. It won’t hurt anything. Nobody will know about it. Mom won’t be home until tomorrow morning at least, so it’s not like she’ll walk in on us or anything. And besides, we’re all over age. All adults. It’s not like you’d be breaking any laws or anything. Come on, Mr J. We really need you for the game.”

“I don’t know, Chloe. If anybody ever found out—”

“But nobody will find out. Come on. Please! You know it’ll be fun.”

I knew it was insane. That’s what I knew. Incredibly insane. They might well have been ‘adults’, but I was still more than twice their age. But then I thought of all those tight, toned bodies and those soft, round breasts… And thought about being there and being part of that game.

To hell with it.

“Okay, Chloe. I’ll play,” I said as I pushed myself up out of the chair. “But I warn you, I’m an excellent poker player. I never lose.”

She squealed, jumped forward and gave me a huge hug. “Thank you!”

She grabbed my hand and dragged me into the hallway and up the stairs. When we walked in to her room she bowed deeply, sweeping her hand in front of me, and said, “Ta da! Told you!”

The girls all clapped and cheered in response.

We sat cross-legged in a circle on the floor, and Jenny explained the rules. Five-card draw, ante one piece of clothing. The player with the weakest hand takes off their ante and hands it to the player with the wining hand. If you later won a hand from someone who holds one of your clothes, you could trade their ante for your own clothes back. And when you lost your last piece of clothing, you were out. It sounded more complicated than it was, and to tell the truth the rules tended to get made up as the game went on, anyway.

The game progressed pretty quickly and Taylor was the first one out. She was on my left, and even though that meant I couldn’t get a clear look at her in all her naked glory without making it obvious I was staring, it also meant that her leg rubbed against mine.

I’ll admit that as the game went on my concentration level dropped somewhat. Excellent poker player I may have been. Immune to female nakedness, I wasn’t.

Jenny was out next. She was sitting directly opposite me with her ankles crossed and her knees spread wide, seemingly oblivious to the view she was giving me. Or maybe she was completely aware of it.

And she still had that cute ‘farm girl’ bandanna thing on as well, which wasn’t helping. Damn she was cute—in a very naughty kind of way.

Beth, sitting on my right, was next to go. Then Chloe, who was sitting between Beth and Jenny. Despite how stunning all the others undoubtedly were, Chloe simply took my breath away. I couldn’t take my eyes off her—and I suppose it was pretty obvious from the smirks on the other girls’ faces.

The game was down to me and Sara. I had only had my briefs left, while Sara had both her bra and her panties. I needed to win two hands in a row to keep what was left of my modesty intact.

Alas, it was not to be. Chloe dealt the hand and I got a pair of Jacks. My heart leaped. I ditched three cards and drew three fresh ones. Sara only drew one. I held my breath and squeezed my cards open. Smiling back at me was a third Jack!

I spread my hand on the table and casually said, “Read em and weep.”

Sara grinned. Then turned over five little hearts. Ah, well. C’est la vie.

I stood and announced “Ladies, I think we have a winner.”

I bent to slide my briefs slowly down to my ankles then stood up straight again, stepped out of them and flicked them towards Sara with my foot. The other girls cheered and applauded as Sara deftly caught them.

She was hugged from both sides by Jenny and Taylor, but she didn’t respond. She instead stared at my cock, which was standing proudly erect in honour of the room full of first class, naked, sexy young women.

I was thoroughly enjoying the view, and it was pretty obvious.

I sat down and looked around at the five gorgeous examples of feminine youth. “Well,” I said. “What now? Shall I go and get us some more coke and snacks?”

Then Taylor blurted out, “Sara wants to touch your dick!”

Sara punched her and turned beet red. “Do not!”

“Yes, you do. Admit it,” Jenny said. Then she looked at me and said, “She’s never gotten her hands on one before. Hell, I think this is the first one she’s ever seen!”

“Jenny!” Sara whined. “Why did you have to tell him that?”

Jenny shrugged and said to her friend, “I’ll bet he’ll let you touch it if you take the rest of your clothes off.”

Chloe grinned at me and said, “Will you, Mr. J? If Sara gets as naked as the rest of us, will you let her touch your dick?”

I grinned. I was probably already going to hell after agreeing to play strip poker in the first place. How much worse could it get? Besides, it was fun teasing Sara. I shrugged. “Sure, why not?”

Sara looked up at me sheepishly, then glanced at my cock again before saying to Chloe, “I’ll take my clothes off. But only to be like everybody else, not just so I can touch his dick. I don’t even care about his dick.”

The other girls cheered again. Jenny stood up and dragged Sara to her feet too. She made Sara face me, then unhooked the smaller girl’s bra from behind and pushed the straps down off her shoulders. Sara shrugged and moved her arms so that the lacy bra fell to the floor.

“Look, Mr Johnson,” Jenny said as she reached around to cup Sara’s breasts. “Virgin boobies. Never been kissed, licked or sucked.” She paused then added with wink, “Well, by a man, at least.”

Sara tipped her head back and let out a small moan as Jenny teased her nipples with her fingers.

After tweaking and pulling her nipples, Jenny finally let go of Sara’s boobs, stepped back and said, “Er, Sara? You still have something left to take off, remember?”

Sara blushed again, then slid her panties down and off. She picked them up and threw them to me with a grin. “These are for you, Mr. Johnson,” She said softly and shyly. “A souvenir.”

“Great idea!” Jenny yelled. She gathered up the other girls’ panties, then handed them to me with a wink.

“Are you gonna let her touch it now?” Taylor asked.

I shrugged. “If she wants to. But only if she wants to.” I looked at Sara. “Sweetheart, you don’t have to do anything you don’t want to do, no matter what anyone says.”

She nodded. Then said, quietly, “So can I?”

I nodded and she reached out, placed her finger on the head of my dick and pushed it down a about an inch. Then she pulled her finger away and giggled wildly as my cock bounced back up.

“Way to go, Sara!” Beth said.

“Hold it,” said Chloe. “Give it a little…” She made a wanking motion with her hand.

Sara’s eyes went wide at this suggestion. She looked at me and I tried to look as unthreatening as I could. “It’s up to you,” I said.

I was definitely going to hell.

Sara reached out and gently held my cock in her small hand. She glanced up at my face a couple of times, but other than that her eyes were fixed firmly on my dick as she watched the foreskin move over the head and back off again as she slowly, gently wanked me.

For me this was excruciating. I was already massively turned on from the poker game and all the boobs and pussies on display. I nearly came pretty much as soon as she held me in her hand, but her gentle, almost delicate treatment of my prick was driving me wild.

“Taste it,” said Chloe. “They’re yummy. Trust me. Give it a lick.”

Sara looked across at her friend then up at me. Her eyes asked me what to do. I shrugged and nodded.

Hell. I was going to hell.

Agonisingly slowly, Sara moved her head down towards my dick. She put her tongue out and tentatively licked the end.

I nearly came right there.

But I didn’t.

She licked me again, a bit firmer this time. Her confidence must have been building. Then Chloe said, “Put the end in your mouth. Go on.”

“Yeah, try it,” said Jenny who was snuggled up to Chloe and straining to see what was happening.

Sara stopped licking to look over at her friends. Then up at me. Then at my dick again. Then she opened her mouth, moved forward and covered the head of my cock. I gasped and held my breath. Then, with lips still wrapped around my dick, Sara looked up at me, our eyes met, and I lost it.

Cum erupted from the end of my dick and blasted into Sara’s mouth. She pulled back, clearly shocked by what had happened. As she coughed and spit out my cum, a second blast shot out and hit her on the chin.

“Eww!” Sara said, as quick as a flash Jenny leapt forward, gobbled up my cock and swallowed down the rest of my load. When I was finished, she sat up, looked me in the eye, rubbed her tummy and said, “Hmm, yummy.” She winked and said, “Please, Sir, can I have some more?”

The other girls giggled, apart from Sara, who still looked shocked as my cum dripped from her chin. I shook my head and said to Jenny, “Not just yet. I’m not as young as I used to be.”

Slumber Party is available here to read as part of your Kindle Unlimited subscription or to purchase for 99c/99p

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